土房子（学生习作）
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><b><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \">土</span></b><b><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"> </font></span></span></b><b><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \">房</span></b><b><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"> </font></span></span></b><b><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \">子</span></b><b><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt\"></span></b></font></p><p /><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font size=\"3\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"></font></font></font></span></p><p /><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"><font face=\"宋体\">某中学初中</font>902</font></span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \">班</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"> </font></span></span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \">严丹丹</span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"></font></font></font></span></p><p /><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"></font></font></font></span></p><p /><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\"></font></span></span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \">“老余啊，你今年的棉花收了几百斤，卖了几千块了，赚了那么多钱，要盖新楼房了吧。”</span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“我盖新房干吗？又没儿子又没女，活一年单，两年双，再说，这土砖壁子很结实呢！”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“你看人家老张的房屋，那气势，那模样，多舒坦哪！”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“那又咋的，再好看，又没有我家的房子结实。来年，我赚够了钱，就是盖，我也还盖土房子。这个老屋，就留着让我家的鸡、鸭子，过上好日子。”说完，老余继续干活。人们怎么劝，他也不信，就纷纷走开了。</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“老伴，我回来了。今天真走运，有个兔子撞到树上，撞伤了，我放下锄子去一看，就把它捡回家了。今天晚上，就把它红烧了吃吧。”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">他的老伴头发早已花白，手里捧着个茶壶，从厨房里蹒跚地走出来，“哦，你的口福还真不浅咧！刚才隔壁林嫂来了，讲我家的墙土掉到他们家的院子里去了，把她家的鸡鸭吓得到处飞呢。”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"><font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#000000\"></font></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“别听她胡说，我家房子挺结实的，肯定是她不服气，找岔。你快烧，我喝两盅。等会，我再去找她算帐！”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoBodyTextIndent\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"> “算了吧，多一事，不如少一事。图个清净，我俩都老了，动火伤自己身体，我还想多吃几年猪油呢。”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoBodyTextIndent\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoBodyTextIndent\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoBodyTextIndent\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoBodyTextIndent\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">老余吃着兔子肉，喝着老白酒，脸上青筋暴起，信了老伴的话，去房里看那老黑白电视去了，他靠在老式木椅上，望着墙壁上斑斑驳驳的石灰，看着椽子、桁条上的小瓦，不多会儿，迷迷糊糊地就打起呼噜了。</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">黄家做红砖屋，他去帮忙；王家在公路边买商品房，他去恭贺。他还总是说自己家的土房子挺结实。</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">可是有一天，不幸的事还是发生了。天刮起了狂风，乌云黑顶的，电闪雷鸣的，下起了一场大雨。</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">大雨过后，老余的土房子倒了一间。隔壁林嫂家的红砖屋还是好好的。</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \">村书记来了，要老余按照建设社会主义新农村的要求，重新盖新房屋。老余说</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New Roman\">:</font></span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \">：“我住了几十年了，都挺好的，都怪这场雨！”</span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></font></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">几天之后，村里派人来帮老余盖房子。老余答应做红砖的了。在拆老屋时，他老伴说：“这几间，不拆，一定要留着，给鸡鸭也住宽敞些。”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">以前劝他盖楼房或者红砖房的人，一个个笑着问他：“老余啊，你咋不盖个土房子，那挺结实呢！”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“哎，别提这档子事了……”</font></span></p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17.95pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.71; mso-char-indent-size: 10.45pt\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\"></font></span></p><p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\"> 上梁那天，老余点燃了万鞭，响彻山谷。</font></span></p><p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \"><font color=\"#0000ff\"> （辅导老师 天涯芳草）</font></span></p> 初中孩子的大作,写得还真不错. 真是祖国的未来啊，写的比我那时候好多了。 具有小说家的潜质，努力、加油！看好你！另，两点愚见：一、兔子一节与主题关联不大，描写过多；
二、村干做耐心细致的工作，宣传党的新农村建设政策、对比红砖房与土砖房的优劣；引导、
帮助他科学、合理建房，才使老余转变观念，未做具体描写，只“村里来人帮忙”一笔匆匆
带过，突出主题不够，稍显美中不足。
以上为一孔之见，望小友以辅导老师意见为准。 时代变了，生活水平提高了，老余的观念也改变了。
文章主题突出，对老余这个人物刻划也较成功。
望努力学习，越写越好！ 嗯，支持一下，努力，加油 <p>引用第1楼露浓花瘦于2006-11-11 19:43发表的: 初中孩子的大作,写得还真不错. </p><p>只是习作。还很稚嫩。</p> <p>引用第2楼蜚短流长于2006-11-11 21:54发表的: 真是祖国的未来啊，写的比我那时候好多了。 </p><p>关键要看未来的发展啊！</p> <p>引用第3楼半本书于2006-11-11 22:58发表的: 具有小说家的潜质，努力、加油！看好你！ 另，两点愚见：一、兔子一节与主题关联不大，描写过多； 二、村干做耐心细致的工作，宣传党的新农村建设政策、对比红砖房与土砖房的优劣；引导、 帮助他科学、合理建房，才使老余转变观念，未做具体描写，只“村里来人帮忙”一笔匆匆 带过，突出主题不够，稍显美中不足。 ....... </p><p>意见很好！谢谢！本文就是原貌，没有做什么改动。</p> <p>引用第4楼轻松于2006-11-12 17:40发表的: 时代变了，生活水平提高了，老余的观念也改变了。文章主题突出，对老余这个人物刻划也较成功。望努力学习，越写越好！ </p><p>好的。谢谢指点！</p>
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